I also removed the net lines from the envelope design to make the design look neater and more polished.
Thursday, 22 November 2012
After the mail shot crit, I decided to change a couple of things which were mentioned in my feedback sheets, for slight improvements. I decided to see what the mail shot would look like as a fold up leaflet, opposed to separate inserts. This would allow the mail shot to be put up in student unions also in Universities/Colleges to spread awareness or even in halls of residences. I feel it flows more and has more continuity, as well as the information being laid out in the correct order for the reader, rather than trying to find relevant information.