The above feedback I found very beneficial. I will change the tile of the Cath Kidston print, and re work the design boards with numbers and a grid structure for further consistency before submission.
I disagree however with the comments about rain. I feel this is the key element which is conversational and feel compliments the design and festival theme well. Other students have seen the prints and haven't commented upon this previously. I am happy with the overall design and this won't be changed, but I will re-work the tile layout and perhaps do more mockups to show how the print could be used further to compliment the stationary mockups created previously.